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I am so tired,beacuse today is a busy day.I got up at 6:00,and finish my breakfast,then help my mother to do some housework,such as clean the table,mop the floor and so on. I ate lunch at 12:00,after that I begin to do my homework,it is not easy.But my friend came to my home and invited me to play ping-pang ball,we play a afternoon. Last I watching TV after ate dinner.It is a full day.