文章学术词汇表达灵活,但存在拼写错误较多;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;应增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意部分有错误的句子。
With rapid development of economy, internet becomes more and more prevalent nowadays . In 1990s china, we merely see person siting before a computer and getting on line, but it is remarkablely changed recently . As far as I am concerned, two aspects contribute to the changes. On the one hand, in contemporary society a multitude of people can afford a device to get on line ,like tablets,laps, smartphones. On the other hand, it is the methods which we communicate with each other. Almost ten yeas ago, communicating was proceeded by face to face mostly, otherwise, talk by mobilephones instead. Nevertheless, the internet play an increasingly important role in communication, there is no denying that mobilephones is indispensable to us. we often send a message to our friends by QQ,Wechat,Fetion,emails without talking to them, so it is far more conveninent,effective,timely and cheap through the internet
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