2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My Views On Online Shopping Hollow, everyone. Now,our know online shopping is fashion,not only younger but also older women,because of everyone like cheap and make own beautiful things.Online Shopping have many advantage,for example,something cheaper than large market and look more beautiful than can touch things in market. But shortcoming,due to just look the picture,quality haven't protect.costume often been cheat,and sometime people will down into this shopping,so shopping useless things. I think maybe our can focus time on online shopping so that shopping cheaper and more useful,focus on achieve your store date.Try to talk with commerce, the more talk,the more know your shopping. Do you assent with me?Try again.