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With rapid development of economy, internet becomes more and more prevalent nowadays . In 1990s china, we merely see person siting before a computer and getting on line, but it is remarkablely changed recently . As far as I am concerned, two aspects contribute to the changes. On the one hand, in contemporary society a multitude of people can afford a device to get on line ,like tablets,laps, smartphones. On the other hand, it is the methods which we communicate with each other. Almost ten yeas ago, communicating was proceeded by face to face mostly, otherwise, talk by mobilephones instead. but now , the internet play an increasingly important role in communication, there is no denying that mobile phones is indispensable to us. we often send messages to our friends by QQ,Wechat,Fetion,email without talking to them, so it is far more convenient,effective,timely and cheap through the internet. As the proverb goes:No garden without weeds, the internet is not an exception, there are both advantages and disadvantages. Disadvantages are apparent ,it will decrease time when we talk face to face. To be honest, it is not a very convenient way but always an essential way. If we seldom communicate face to face, it will be difficult to acquire the signal of peoples' emotion and attitude
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