高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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As the world has bocome more and more open ,imporve our manmers behavier is necessary. Is very important to have a polite behavier for international communicationa. Also,imporve our behavier is helpful to achieve the modernization dream of our country. But in modern society ,many people behave im bad manners . For exampl,many people are used to cross the stress when the traffic light still in red, as they ignore the traffic rude,they put their life in a danger situation. Aiso,we can always see the picture that people are trying jumping the queue in whereever that need to form a line .What more, people spit in pulic place which is insanitation. In my opinion, imporve national quality is a very heavy responsibilities ,and the road is still long .We should try our best to do it.