高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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As the world has become more and more open,imporve our manners behavior is necessary. Is very important to have a polite behavior for international communication. Also,imporve our behavior is helpful to achieve the modern dream of our country. But in modern society,many people behave im bad manners. For examplE,many people are used to cross the stress when the traffic light still in red. As they ignore the traffic rudes,they put their life in a danger situation. Aiso,we can always see the picture that people are trying jumping the queue in wherever that need to form a line.What's more, people spit in public place which is insanitation. In my opinion, improve national quality is a very heavy responsibilities,and the road is still long .We should try our best to do it.