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the famous university campus tours are now becoming the travel hot spot,commonly,the scenery in the university is beautiful,and the atmosphere is really good.naturally,they have become the good place people want to go. there are many differant views among people about whether the university campus should be open to tourists.it is useful to the people who travel the campus and feel the atmosphere of academic.the campus also gain the money of traveling.but to a degree,it make the teaching order become terrible,some tourists will even throw litter here and there,make the campus very dirty. as far as i am concerned,i think that people should be permited to the university campus on weekends and they should be limited in some aspects.