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2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:27浏览次数:5958
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :   
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点    
2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同    
3.我认为……
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

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the famous university campus tours are now becoming the travel hot spot,commonly,the scenery in the university is beautiful,and the atmosphere is really good.naturally,they have become the good place people want to go. there are many differant views among people about whether the university campus should be open to tourists.it is useful to the people who travel the campus and feel the atmosphere of academic.the campus also gain the money of traveling.but to a degree,it make the teaching order become terrible,some tourists will even throw litter here and there,make the campus very dirty. as far as i am concerned,i think that people should be permited to the university campus on weekends and they should be limited in some aspects.

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