高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。

As the world has become more and more open,improving our manners is necessary. Is very important to have a polite behavior for international communication.Also,improving our behavior is helpful to achieve the modern dream of our country. But in modern society,many people have uncivilized behavior . For examplE,many people are used to cross the stress when the traffic light still in red. As they ignore the traffic rules,they put their life in a danger situation. Aiso,we can always see the picture that people are trying jumping the queue in wherever that need to form a line.What's more, people spit in public place which is insanitation. In my opinion, improving national quality is a very heavy responsibilities,but the road is still long.We should try our best to do it.