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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
When I was young as a pupil in sixth grade in school. I could run only a circle at a time. Nevertheless my PE teacher told me I can do it better after training properly. One cold day I started running on the early morning. A month later, I could run two circles already. This thing taught me that if I never began to solve the problem it would be always a problem. Do it properly and put more effort into it, after that it will be no difficulty in any circumstance.
可可英语 - 划词释义
