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As we all know,Life won't always be everything is going smoothly.It likes a journey.In the long journey,we will come across abstrals on the way.At this time,we need a strong will to keep us moving on.Only with a strong will can we finish the rest journey and see beautiful view.Otherwise,we will miss the opportunity to see wonderfull things in our short as well as long life. There is no doutb that strong will is the guarantee of success.People who without a strong will will always abandon things what they do a half.In our daily life,many such examples can be seen.For instance,my friend PP,he do a hard mark question and spent lots of time on it.But he could not work out it.At last,he gave up.However,when he look up the answer,he found he only owe a step to reach the answer.Later he regret for not insisting to the last.Obviously,nothing succeeds without a strong will. No matter what we do,we should insist on it until the last minues.Because only the people with a strong will can finish the great missions.So do the students.If we do not work hard in study,we won not get the high marks in exams.Besides,it is difficult for us to be a man which is useful to our society.Therefore,in order to be the great,we should have a strong will in doing everthing. Last but not least,under no circumstances should we ignore the importance of having a strong wil in doing things.Only in this way,can we reach the success of the top of the mountain.
