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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请注意分段。
None of us like failure because it causes sadness, regret or fear. However, most of us believe that it is through the pain of failure that we learn. I think it’s true. We can get some experience through failure, which is something valuable in one’s life . Several years ago , I was not good at English spelling and always failed in dictations . My teacher encouraged and helped me a lot. Gradually I got the way of remembering words and made progress in English. So I think success won’t come to us by itself unless we go to it.
