小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog,his name is Dudu,he is cute though he is fat.And he is nine-year-old. I got it from the street.he just like my friend,he walks with me every week,and when I do my homework he like sitting on the table and looking at me.Of course he sleeps in my bed every night,beacuse of him I have good dreams . I like swimming,so does Dudu.thus we always swim in the pool which is near my house.We play games and pat the water and so on. I thank for Dudu,he bring a happy life to me and I never forget.