2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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with the rapid development of ecomomy and advanced information technology, computers are widely used in our daily lfe. there is no denying that it has a profound effect on our lifestyle . Nevertheless, it is hard to say that it has more negative or positive influences. To be honest, as far as I am concerned, the positive influence dominate