2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达较准确，学术词汇表达灵活；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

with the rapid development of economy and advanced information technology, computers are widely used in our daily lfe. There is no denying that it has a profound effect on our lifestyle. Nevertheless, it is hard to say that it has more negative or positive influences. But , as far as I am concerned, the positive influence is more important.