2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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From this figure we can see the difference between the lower education to higher education,it is obversely that the higher education person can get higher salary than the lower , also with the lower unemployment rate .The highest wage is payed to the professional degree that would be 1,665 dollar,and the lowest is payed for the less than high school diploma and that would be 451 dollar.So ,basis on this figure we can see the unemployment rate and the earnings are subject to the education .