2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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if someone want to successful you should have a strong will.why do you say? because as long as you have a strong will you will do not worry face to trouble you can overcome you face to trouble and finish you feat goal As a student we should have a strong will it is very importance when you want to give up you difficult job you should say to youself i belive i can and you must complete you job if you do not have a strong will you can not do anything no matter what do you do you should have a strong will when you wnnt to give up repeat review you homework and you fell boring you should have a strong will and understand study is youself thing i think as long as you have a strong will you will be a successful man