小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I am a lucky girl ,beacuse I have got some good friends who can see my sad even when I smill to everyone else just to hid myself.One of my best friends is called xiufang,she is an ambicous young girl full of enthusiasm and vitality .She works in a big company which pays her an arresting salary.