2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，词汇量总体偏小，注意词汇拼写的检查；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；句式变化较丰富，但文中有句子错误；请注意分段。

with the economic developped so quickly .there are more different kinds of function to make people more comfortable to finish their jobs.but computer is not available to do some work, they can not design with innovation and solve something emotionally, so computer can not be replaced to the people.On the other hand,computer can serve some complicated work like mathmatic compute that person can not work out immedately