2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，词汇量总体偏小，注意词汇拼写的检查；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够使用一些不错的从句；请注意分段；副词使用偏多。

with the economic developped so quickly.there are more different kinds of function to make person more comfortable to finish their jobs.but computer is not available to do some work, they can not design with innovation and solve something emotionally, so computer can not be replaced to the peeson.On the other hand,computer can serve some complicated work like mathmatic compute that person can not work out immediately.