2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章学术词汇表达灵活，词汇量的积累还要努力，另外注意词汇拼写的检查；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够使用一些不错的从句；请注意分段；副词使用偏多。

with the economic developped so quickly.there are more different kinds of function to make person more comfortable to finish their jobs.but computer is not available to do some work, they can not design with innovation and solve something emotionally, so computer can not be replaced to the peeson.On the other hand,computer can serve some complicated work like mathematics compute that person can not work out immediately.