2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较准确地使用学术词汇，不过存在个别拼写错误；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮；请注意分段；副词使用偏多。

With the economic developped so quickly.There are more different kinds of function to make person more comfortable to finish their jobs.But computer is not available to do some work, They can not design with innovation and solve something emotionally, So computer can not be replaced to the peeson.On the other hand,computer can serve some complicated work like computing mathematics that person can not work out immediately. With the user in China growing more and more quickly,It also brings some disadvantages just like near sighted with abusing of young person eyes.