2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文中词汇多样性不足，学术词汇积累做的很棒；请注意分段；副词使用偏多。

With the economic developed so quickly.There are more different kinds of function to make person more comfortable to finish their jobs.But computer is not available to do some work, They can not design with innovation and solve something emotionally, So computer can not be replaced to the person.On the other hand,computer can serve some complicated work like computing mathematics that person can not work out immediately. With the user in China growing more and more quickly,It also has some disadvantages just like near sighted with abusing of person,expercially the younger.