2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮；请注意分段；副词使用偏多。

With the economic developed so quickly.There are more different kinds of function to make person more comfortable to finish their jobs.But computer is not available to do some work, They can not design with innovation and solve something emotionally, So computer can not be replaced to the person.On the other hand,computer can serve some complicated work like computing mathematics that person can not work out immediately. With the user in China growing more and more quickly,It also has some disadvantages just like near sighted with abusing of person,especially the younger.My suggestion is how to use the computer in an appropriate way and proper time