题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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With the economic developed so quickly.There are more different kinds of functions to make person more comfortable to finish their jobs.But computer is not available to do some work, They can not design with innovation and solve something emotionally, So computer can not be replaced to the person.On the other hand,computer can serve some complicated work like how to compute mathematics formula that person can not work out immediately. With the user in China growing more and more quickly,It also has some disadvantages just like near sighted with abusing of person,especially the younger.In my opinion, My suggestion is how to use the computer in an appropriate way and proper time.I suppose computer will be better served for us and adapt to us either.this interpeting machine is very foolish