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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;全文结构较为严谨;能够使用一些不错的从句;请注意分段。

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With the economic developed so quickly.There are more different kinds of functions to make person more comfortable to finish their jobs.But computer is not available to do some work, They can not design with innovation and solve something emotionally, So computer can not be replaced to the person.On the other hand,computer can serve some complicated work like how to compute mathematics formula that person can not work out immediately. With the user in China growing more and more quickly,It also has some disadvantages just like near sighted with abusing of person,especially the younger.In my opinion, My suggestion is how to use the computer in an appropriate way and proper time.I suppose computer will be better served for us and adapt to us either.This interpreting machine is extremely foolish which makes me so upset dswfaqfafsad梵蒂冈和规范

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