2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Everything won't succeed without a strong will.In ous life we can notice a lot of people those made many devotions and cultures live with strong will.So,why do they have this?As for myself,i strongly think it's importance to do anything with it,which is a promise to ous,at the same time,only in this way can we finish anything. Acually,we as a students should do that,learning to stady hard and becoming a useful men.