2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Everything won't succeed without a Strong Willl.In ours life we can notice a lot of people those made many devotions and cultures live with a Strong Will.So,why do they have this?As for myself,I strongly think it's importance to do anything with it,which is a promise ,at the same time,only in this way can we finish anything perfectly. Acually,we as students should do that,learning to study hard and becoming an excellent men.