2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,the computer is popular for teenager and children.when we do not use the computer any longer that my be we have a boring life.we used to put the computer as search root and now is a widely common in our life. we can't do any thing without computer.the computer is our human's achievement.