2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,the computer is popular for teenager and children.When we do not use the computer any longer that may be we have a boring life.We used to put the computer as a good root and now is a widely common in our life.Without a computer we can't do any thing.The computer is our human's achievement.What do you think of the computer and human.Last but not least,the computer plays an important part in our life.But we should know the computer's advantage and disadvantage.On the one hand,the computer take some wrong with people.Such as,our eyes may be sufferd a bad influence.