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新东方托福高分作文:历史对人们现在的生活有何价值

发布时间:2013-07-30 16:45浏览次数:686
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题目要求:

Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

不能同意。No是一个绝对的修饰词。只要列出三个values or advantages of learning history就可以了。

 

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

Fast as the society developing, many people hold on that, for us living in the present, it is useless to learn about the past, in my view, this opinion is absolute ridiculous and ignorance. To learn the past,firstly, enable all of us to have a knowledge about ourselves. the past, especially the history, just like a mirror, we, by learning the past,can clearly know our drawbacks and shortcomings, for example, comparing with the methods of development in the past, it is useful for political makers to find a suitable and right way to develop our country, what's more, we can be instilled high moral values by learning the merits of our ancestors, being impressed by the arduous life of Li Bai, one of the most famous poets in China's history, we, especially for the students, can be motivated by his endeavors. It is our responsibility to heritage what our ancestors left as well, so it is necessary for every of us to learn the past. Learning the past, we can have a good knowledge of the meaning of what our ancestors left, for example, the historic meaning of the arts ,the old architectures, only we learn the past can we understand them perfectly. Addmititely, we need to spent more energy and vigor in learning the advanced science and technology, however, as long as we pay more attention to the past, for example, the technology of the old architectures, the history lessons of the past, there are increasing numbers of inspirations being offered to us to make great progress. To conclude, it is crucial and dispensable for us to learn the past.

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