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Question: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位，概括和分类仔细审题，就某个问题写一篇感想，或就一个事件进行阐述，解释以及论证自己的观点，列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 大量的钱可以使我们过上更舒适的生活。
2、 金钱只是物质交换的工具，满足舒适的生活已经足够。
错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；作者能较灵活使用学术词汇，但词汇量仍需继续积累单词拼写要认真；连词使用偏少。
With the development of economic in our country ,more and more people become more involed in money.With regard to this issue,different people expressed different opinions . Some hold that money is inevitable to our life ,they play important roles in all spects in our daily life .And they think ,we can live a more comfortable and easy life with more money .More importantly ,they think it is the symbol of success to abtain large amounts of money. While others maintain that money is just a small part of our whole lifes,it is not neccesy to abtain as much as more money.And it is ok to just satisfy our basic neccessity.
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