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新东方托福高分作文:历史对人们现在的生活有何价值

发布时间:2013-07-30 16:45浏览次数:685
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题目要求:

Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

不能同意。No是一个绝对的修饰词。只要列出三个values or advantages of learning history就可以了。

 

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;注意文中个别的句子错误;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

Fast as the society developing, many people hold on that, for us living in the present, it is useless to learn about the past, in my view, this opinion is absolute ridiculous and ignorance. Learning the past,firstly, enable all of us to have knowledge about ourselves. The past, especially the history, just like a mirror, we, by learning the past,can clearly know our drawbacks and shortcomings, for example, comparing with the methods of development in the past, it is useful for political makers to find a suitable and right way to develop our country, what's more, we can be instilled high moral values by learning the merits of our ancestors, being impressed by the arduous life of Li Bai,one of the most famous poets in China's history, we, especially for the students, can be motivated by his endeavors. It is our responsibility to inherit what our ancestors left and to make our offspring inherit them as well, so it is necessary for every of us to learn the past. Learning the past, we can have a good knowledge of the meaning of what our ancestors left, for example, the historic meaning of the arts ,the old architectures, only we learn the past can we understand them perfectly. What we learn from the past for instance the culture of the various dynasties, the custom and traditions what our ancestors left, the history lessons needed to know and so on ,is so precious and valuable that we have the responsibility and obligation to teach our offspring, so we need to have good knowledge of the past. Admittedly, we need to spend more energy and vigor in learning the advanced science and technology, however, as long as we pay more attention to the past, for example, the technology of the old architectures, the history lessons of the past, there are increasing numbers of inspirations being offered to us to make great progress. To conclude, it is crucial and indispensable for us to learn the past.

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