托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分学术词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

snap judgements could be seen everywhere in our daily life. for example, we may judge a star's inner quality from the movie he or she plays. some people think the snap judgements couldn't be trusted for us. without elaborate analysis, we couldn't make a right decision. in stock market, many investors buy stock according to the brief news broadcast by mass media or other people's view on the coporates. this stragedy always leads to failure. we make decisions confined to the information we have. and the information is always not so accurate or detailed as we expect. so we need to look for more information and analyse detailed befroe we make a decision. but on the contrast, some people think snap judgements have its reasoniing. in many situations, we can make a judgement only on a little information. during an interview, the official make a judgement according to a few minutes of talking, a simple resume and the first impression. it is snap but can't be changed a lot. in my oppinion, we should think twice before making a judgement. a wrong judgement can make you loss in the stock market, hurt others' feeling or make a big mistake in your life. that is we should try our best to analyse from different perspectives to make right judgement.