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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句的使用,注意几处句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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      I still remember the first book that I regard as good and unforgettable is Jane Eyre,which describes how the poor little girl ,Jane Eyre,went through those hardships and finally fell in love with the leading man and led a happy life.I love the book so much that I opened it even after the beginning of the lesson.What a relaxing and enjoyable moment!    However, compared the above experience with nowadays,I surprisingly find that I can hardly concentrate on a book with my mobile phone.What’s worse,I take it as a commission,a burden since I just want to get the result instead of enjoying the reading process.Not only does using mobile phone take up so much of our time,but also we always reach it unconsciously.    One of my writing teacher have ever told us this principle that if you don’t take notes when reading a book,you’re actually not reading it,but just spoiling intention of the author and wasting your time.    I can’t agree more on this principle for the reason that without taking notes,you’re just going through the book dumbly with no thoughts.However,it’s easier to say than do.When asking ourselves,can you really put that into action?The answer is “no”.    Why?Have no time?Too busy?Books are boring?Those excuses can’t give an explanation for why you have time on microblogs.    From my point of view,the fundamental reason is that influenced by the fast-food culture,we are so lazy that we have no interest in process,we just need results,which explains the appearance of Title Party.I can’t guarantee to take notes but gradually slow my pace and find fun in books.

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