2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

From the picture ,we can get the following massages.Fristly,there are higher unemployment rate when people have not required high education in 2011.Besides,they earn less than people who have gianed diploma even degree. Secondly,concerning the whole part,the better degree you have ,the much money you gain in the 2011.People without high school diploma have less change to be employed and even they gain a job, they only earn 4% of the one with doctoral degree. Above all,the education is worthwhile for it give the graduates more change to live a bettle life.