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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33547
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Be a smart consumer Collecting all kinds of coupons,looking for group-buy deals when eat out or travel and buying clothes when it's on sale,all this actions are reasonable and smart enough as far as i'm concerned.Students are usually relying on their parents financially,which makes it a must for them to be economic in their diary life. First and foremost,all the actions mentioned above are for the purpose to cut the budget and live a better material life.It's a good thing for the students to learn how to make big use with limited money and learn to keep a balance between the amount of money they have and the kind of life they pursue.Besides,coupons,group-buy deals and stuff on sale do not mean low quality,real smart ones always know when to buy great things as a bargain.When students chose the right time and they will get much more by spending much less,that's a talent all people should develop in their life. Given the factors presented above,i hold the opinion that all the actions make the students smart consumers and i hold the believe that by doing that,students will develop the conception about how to take all-out advantages of limited money and live a better life.

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