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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Be a smart consumer Collecting all kinds of coupons,looking for group-buy deals when eat out or travel and buying clothes when it's on sale,all this actions are reasonable and smart enough as far as i'm concerned.Students are usually relying on their parents financially,which makes it a must for them to be economic in their diary life. First and foremost,all the actions mentioned above are for the purpose to cut the budget and live a better material life.It's a good thing for the students to learn how to make big use with limited money and learn to keep a balance between the amount of money they have and the kind of life they pursue.Besides,coupons,group-buy deals and stuff on sale do not mean low quality,real smart ones always know when to buy great things as a bargain.When students chose the right time and they will get much more by spending much less,that's a talent all people should develop in their life. Given the factors presented above,i hold the opinion that all the actions make the students smart consumers and i hold the believe that by doing that,students will develop the conception about how to take all-out advantages of limited money and live a better life.