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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9781
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
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文章学术词汇表达灵活,还要注意词汇拼写的检查;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

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I't is universally ackonwleged that along with the rapid enonomic development. There are many commodities have over package,which wast considerable money and added extra fees for consumer to pay. Factors are involved in the creation of the extra packageed.First in first .The consummer who will be impressed by beautiful things ,which lead to the commdities do extra package in order to raise the yield.In addition,the more the goodd look like the more chance they will have to be sold.The commedities will have more profit.Afterwards,at a rat race with the market, merchant are supposed to development themselves to fix it . In conclusion,the factors above lead to the extra package .Comfirming this issues ,goverment should prefect the economic policy improve the taxation policy and strengthen the law to protect the equities of consumer.

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