2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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As we all know,Life won't always be everything is going smoothly.It likes a journey.On a long journey,we would come across many obstacles on the way.At this time,we need a strong will to keep us moving on.Only with a strong will can we finish the rest of the journey and see beautiful views.Otherwise,we would miss the opportunity to see wonderful things in our short as well as long life. There is no doubt that a strong will is the guarantee of success.People who without a strong mind will always abandon things what they do a half.In our daily life,many such examples can be seen.For instance,my friend PP,he did a hard math problem and spent lots of time in doing it.But he could not work it out.At last,he gave up.However,when he look up the answer,he found he only owe a little to reach the answer.Later he regretted for not insisting to the last.Obviously,nothing succeeds without a strong will. No matter what we do,we should insist on it until the last minus.Because only the people with a strong will can finish the hard tasks.So do the students.If we do not work hard in study,we won not get the high marks in exams.Besides,it is difficult for us to be a man who is useful to our society.Therefore,in order to be the great,we should have a strong will in doing everything. Last but not least,under no circumstances should we ignore the importance of having a strong will in doing things.Only in this way,can we reach the success of the top of the mountain.