2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者能较准确地使用学术词汇，不过存在个别拼写错误；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨。

I't is universally acknowledged that along with the rapid economic development. There are many commodities over packaged,which spend considerable money and added extra fees for consumer to pay. Factors are involved in the creation of the extra package.First in first,the consumer who will have deep impression extra package goods ,which lead to the commodities do extra package in order to raise the yield.In addition,the more the goodd look like the more chance they will have to be sold.The commedities will have more profit.Afterwards,at a rat race with the market, merchant are supposed to development themselves to fix it . In conclusion,the factors above lead to the extra package .Comfronting this issues ,goverment should prefect the economic policy improve the taxation policy and strengthen the law to protect the equities of consumer.