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it is easy for us to hear the phononmenon that students in university are sucide for love,confliction with classmates,even more,horrible to hear that lin was dead for the envy of his classmates in fudaqn university. we need to take measures to improve students mental health imdiate，granting for the steady development of our sciety.the harmony of our humannity.it is no time for us to wait. as universities,there are various of methods can be done,can associate people to help students out of the trouble they face,like metal health coner and other kind of groups,school can also organize activities to improve students mental health. as for us,we need to learn more about ourselves,facing the adventages and disadventages,learn to improve us,and forming lovely heart to help the people around,improve ourselves by facing chalenges around us,learning that life is beautiful,and how to make our life meaningful,how to make ourselves shining the worlds.
