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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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With the development of the economy, our country have paied more and more attention to youths' education ; and our parents want us to becometalante person,getting a higher paied job and enjoying our life. So even the pay of education was high , we still can accept education. I think the pay of education is so high that some students in poor family can not offered it. it is do harm to the humniors and equal about our sociaty. maybe our government should decreased the tuition of the education. country can get money from bussiness instead of by getting the education fees, it is my opionion. If we really can go to school without money ,maybe,the quality of our crizens will improved quilkly. and our country will bacome rich and strong.
