题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
with the development of the science and technology,computer is become an increasingly use in our daily life .no one can deny the fact that computer play an important role in our life . lt is amostly known that computer is of great benetif to us .firstly ,it can help us to commuciate with friends and familywho was far away with us .scondly ,it is important for us to research some imformation on the network .however ,there are also be farmful to us ,first at all ,there are more and more people tend to choose some idea in the internet rather than using of their creation. equally important, some people could write the word because they often type the words on the computer . from what have been meantion above ,we can early seen that everything divide into two ,there are some beneficial to us and some harmful to us ,therefore ,l can be safe said that we should make use of computer and should not lose yourself in the computer ,only in this way ,can we be successful in the future .