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【题目要求】
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
【题目分析】
这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意：不要只说my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。人们会喜欢的有：女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围；人们会讨厌的有：交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；采用了一些简单的从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
To Tom Subject English Language Teaching conference Hi Tom I am writing to inform you of a conference on English Language Teaching held in Beijing.The English Language Teaching is a English language exchange meeting.If you take part in this meeting ,which can help you make many Chinese friends.If you come Beijing ,I will take you planing anywhere .I think you should take this chance. Yours Liming
