2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How should parents help children to be independent?It is not only for parents but for children.Frist,parents should trust their children and give them more freedom,i think this is what children want.Then,when they are down,parents should give them more speace,let them clam,and then,find way to sovle the problem,just guide.Also,children can go out to see the outside world if possible,it can make them more independent.Without parents but can have friends.What's more,parents should make children independent from childhood,it's very important.