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Nowdays, it is so important for us students to learn well and grow up healthly, which need a green campus. In usual, we may think the Green school is only the green trees in the school, it is pretty wrong. Green school not only describe as natural environment, but also refer to the cultural environment. For example, in recent years, some students don't concentrate on study but on somethings unhealty to them, smoking, love and so on. Those lead to pretty bad effect for creating green campus, also not good to the learning of students. For creating green school, firstly, we should do well from ourselves, strickly observe the rules of our school, refuse some bad habit. Secondly, we can together with classmates advocate creating green campus. Lastly, to school, shoud work hard to create better green campus for students. Only can we do our best, we will live in a comfortable, green campus.
