2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

全文结构较为严谨；有效的运用了一些复杂句；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误；请注意分段。

There are a peonomena that many goods have been over-prized today.For instence,cars, beatys always been showed with a bad car to make people believe that the car is as worderful as the woman,who smiling beside it .We can't stop the trend.However,we can konw the reason why it happened.It is the businssman who want people to be attached and pay much money for the good than it actually worth that make the trend.Peole would buy the things ,which look better that it is,is the other reason.As far as I am conconred,it is nothing stange for people with strongly determination to earn money to do this.By the way,if customer know more about the goods they purcure,the peonomena wouldn't be endless.