2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真。

Today ,the country cost more and more money in education. most school have saved it ,and people can learn knewldge which don't cost big. Some people see a regular when educations cost big the employment rates will descend .The draw is dipict that from university student when there are have out school to work and country cost in education. at left the unemployment rate in 2011 had descend ,the another is median weekly earnings in 2011 is ascend . We can see that economic depending as soon as our education.when country take most money in education we can aquied more elite.so the unemployment rate also descend.