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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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since recent 10 years, more and more people in some cities have chosen to travel when they are in idle according to the picture. with the remarkable booming of the phenomenon of it,there is necessary to take the reason into consideration. many reasons contribute to it. first, people who live in city endure huge pressure in their daily life. they want to relax themselves via travel. second, people enjoy the valuable time with their family, so that they choose to travel in their both idle time. last but not least, with the development of social economy, their salary have been increased . of course, there are many influences have appeared because of it. for example, lots of area have been development thanks to the booming of travel filed. what is more, different cultures have been mixed together. however, there are two sides in a coin. with the development of travel filed, some pollution problem have become more serious.

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