雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,there is a trend that people always travel to foreign countries at their spare time.With the increasing of the average level of citizen's salary and the improving of vehicles,it is easier and more convenient for them to experience a new kind of lifestyle. Travelling is that going to a fresh new place that someone else is bored with there.It is obvious that a different world always has special attraction.Nobody can object to exploring an unknown place.If you decide to travel to another city,you need a long holiday because flying or shipping usually costs too much time.And then,you can use several days to deeply relax yourself which is a good way to release the tired carried from every day’s high speed working pace.Also,people need a friend or a family member to share fantastic scenic spots.Therefore,during this journey,relationship can be strengthened as well as connection.Last but not least,some conditions will never occur like guiders force tourists to buy things with high price but low quality. However,every sword has two blades.Travelling has no exception.It is always too dangerous to go abroad as the safe problem always existing.It is suggested that we need to search informations about the condition of the local government.Even though,we are careful enough,there can be some emergency situation that we can’t foresee.Furthermore,it is still a high price considering most family’s income per year.There may be some disappointment when seeing the view which cannot compared with some in native countries. From my perspective,travelling abroad means broadening my sight and acknowledging more customs that may vanish one day as the unification of international culture.I do encourage young people to visiting more places if their parents can afford the money.