高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past,my hometown was very beautiful,with variety trees hugged it.And the water in the river was clear,fishes playing in it happily.People worked all day but made a little money,so they lead a hard life and their houses were old,their streets were shallow. But now,everything has changed.Many huge buildings have been erected,the streets become wide and were covered by lots of vehicle.Growing industries are polluting environment,leading to the reduction of trees and fishes.So the most important things we face is to control pollution to turn our hometown a beautiful place again.